The Great Dissection - Part 2

Seriously, did you need to use “to the attack” twice in a row?

“There was a period of time 2 years prior to the attack to the attack that dramatically changed my views.The period of time was from, beginning of April,2017 until the end May,2017.”

That whole first sentence needs fixing. I would have suggested instead: two years prior to the attack, there was a period of time that dramatically changed my views. And the word removalist in the phrase “kebab removalist” doesn’t seem familiar to most of you, but it’s used in Brenton’s native Australia as a word for a domestic removals company, and has also been used to mean one who advocates the removal of native populations from their land; see Wiktionary entry at https://en.m.wiktionary.org/wiki/removalist.

For a complete amateur, he seems to have the terrorist game all figured out. For instance, his reasoning as to why New Zealand: “New Zealand was not the original choice for attack, I only arrived to New Zealand to live temporarily whilst I planned and trained, but I soon found out that New Zealand was as target rich of an environment as anywhere else in the West.

Secondly an attack in New Zealand would bring to attention the truth of the assault on our civilization, that no where in the world was safe, the invaders were in all of our lands, even in the remotest areas of the world and that there was no where left to go that was safe and free from mass immigration.” And why guns instead of real terrorist weapons like bombs: “I chose firearms for the affect it would have on social discourse, the extra media coverage they would provide and the affect it could have on the politics of United states and thereby the political situation of the world. The US is torn into many factions by its second amendment, along state, social, cultural and, most importantly, racial lines.

With enough pressure the left wing within the United states will seek to abolish the second amendment, and the right wing within the US will see this as an attack on their very freedom and liberty.

This attempted abolishment of rights by the left will result in a dramatic polarization of the people in the United States and eventually a fracturing of the US along cultural and racial lines.” Yes, abolishment. When abolition would have clearly made more sense. No class whatsoever. But I don’t really expect better from him, he is after all an Aussie.